The Warriors 2

GUYS I HAVE EDITED THE STORY. REDPAW IS NOW A JAGUAR NAMED GOLDENBLAZE



I hear a cry, "PETALFUR IS HAVING KITS!" I rush toward the nursery to see a leopard growling in pain, a lion peering worriedly at her and panther feeling the ripples of her stomach as the kits come out. A pair of baby leopards are pushed out and whine as the panther nip open their sacs to breath, and lick them in the wrong way to warm them. They crawl towards the mother for milk, a beautiful sight. The lion and leopard smile happily but weakly at each other. As I step over the moss beds I decide to hunt for the pair. I slither through the brambles and step into the Jungle Territory. I see an antelope leap from the Savannah Territory into the deep trees of the Jungle. I leap on it silently and silence it. I give a prayer for its life. I bring it back to the nursery, its horns once great and high now limp, with death. I give them the antelope where they too give a prayer of thanks and take bites. I felt lonely, jealous that I didn't have a mate myself. I climb through the Bare Forest Territory and climb the spruce and oak trees gazing lonely at the stars. I hear a growl behind me as a huge rouge, scarred tiger leaps at me. I jump nimbly away and start running. I gasp in fear as he draws closer and rush into the Savannah Territory as he tries to strike again. My bright yellow pelt shines in the moonlight as I cry when he swats my tail hard. I see a large bush full of thickets and leap high over it. My hind paw catches and drops of the scarlet blood drop down like raindrops. But I jump high enough. I know my quickness is no match for his strength but he cant jump or run fast Enoch, He tumbles into the Sharp thorns and growls, giving up the chase. I look forward, realizing I was lost and hungry. I find a small sparrow and try to jump at it, failing. However, a gold line rises on the horizon as the sun rises like a Phoenix.

The Warriors

The Warriors

By Kimberley Ng

1 part 1

I walked out of my den, yawning from sleep. "Hey Redpaw's finally awake!" Said Goldenpaw the leopard.I and Goldenpaw were only apprentices and so was Riverpaw and Grasspaw. We are training to become warriors. We will get our warrior names soon after all our training is done. My mentor was a Jagaur named Spotfur and the leader was a lion named Sunstar. "Come on Ravenpaw, your going on a hhunting patrol." I went along with the patrol, walking along the thick trees and greens of the  forest we live in. "Spread out."Ordered the leader of the patrol. I went into a place where a birch tree had sprung and a herd of deer were there. I sliently climbed up a tree without them knowing and then, rested on a branch, leaped down on a deer. I struggled to keep on her back but luckliy my claws dug in a bit deeper so I could anchor my self. I finally brought her down and whispered a thanks to heaven. I then draged the deer back to the hunting patrol and layed it in the pile. "Good job!" Spotfur prasied me, as we walked back to camp, all of us holding a rather large piece of prey when another hunting patrol came back too. When we put the fresh-kill into our pile at camp everyone plucked out their favorite meal and ate there, very large fill. I was taking out an fish and bit into it, savoring the sweetness, of the salmons last meal.

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Hey guys!!! Yes Im back, sorry about the half year delay but Ive been real busy with school. SO SORRY!!!T_T But there is good news! A new series!!!Why you ask? Well I want to it and I have time so the new series is based off the book Warriors and There might be MANY new series so YAY!!!






Heres a review and lastly
ANIMAL ON!
(Yeah I didnt forget)

Julie the Wolf 1 part 3

Julie the Wolf 

1 part 3

Julie saw some wolves eating a large elk. They were so into the elk

they didn't notice her. One rolled in happiness and caught a sight of her. 

She growled and the pack looked and saw her. One drew back a snarl 

while the rest had a good scent and look of her. The pack 

 stepped forward and the dominate held up his tail and stop them. 

"What are you doing here?" he asked. Julie stepped forward so they had a

better look. "Licking foxes, can't you figure it out?" 

she said with confident. He started bristling

with anger. He stepped forward and growled deeply, 

"Don't joke with us," and Julie snarled. "Make me."

The dominate lashed his tail and the wolves started to Julie. She

ran, sometimes kicking up some snow in their faces or making 

very sharp and sudden turns around rocks to trick them. Their

anger messed them up to nearly crash into snow piles. After a while of this

they ran faster in frustration and caught up lashing out claws. 

Julie pranced around them running and then cutting though them and 

confusing them. Then Julie got an idea and barked loudly and ran though 

some shadows very quickly, bolting out of nowhere to make it seem

it was an ambush with many wolves. The wolves seem scared and

crazed, blindly clawing the air. Finally the wolves leaped away and broke 

into a run not looking back. Julie let out a woof of laughter 

and humor and saw the sun going down.

As Julie looker for shelter a fox ran though the bushes and 

Julie only saw the movement. The fox lashed a patch of grass hidden 

in the shadows and Julie backed up and tucked

her tail between her legs. The fox shook a branch lightly still hidden. 

Julie let out a whimper and backed up into a wall of stone. The fox let out a 

deep growl that sounded like a strong wolf rather then a small 

fox. Julie bowed her head and dug a little bit to hide in. It turned 

dark for the sun just went down and the fox stepped out so

only the shape of it stood. Julie whimpered and suddenly

snarled leaping on the fox. The fox yelped and wiggled out 

fleeing. Julie growled at herself for being so easily

tricked and found some moss and lay on it. Tired in the

shelter of under a cliff and quickly fell asleep.

News on blog

Julie the wolf  is my new story and I got hurt when horse ridding, heres some tips what to do.

: When a horse goes into a sharp thorn bush duck your head low and keep your arms in no matter what.
:If your horse starts quickly walking around in circles not following your orders and being crazy grab the saddle horn which is your back up brake. If it donsent work your dead, just kidding use your normal brake which WILL stop it. If that donsent work and it will, hold on your best and try to stop your horse.

Please note that Julie the wolf is somewhat reaslitic or is very very lucky because woplves often suffer much much more.

I wouldn't quit in a while and if you guys realiz I have been way more mature with my posts like the debate
on puppy mills even though you probarly would pick no more puppy mills.

Also vote on if I should continan with the story of Ivy, for its not real and I would like to work on Julie.
Also if you didnt  figure out what moons means it means months and I will work on a list and edit or repost it for wolf talk.


Bye and Animal On  :) !

Julie the wolf 1 part 2

Julie the wolf

1 part 2

Julie growled a warning and backed away a little. The bear stepped forward.

When Julie finished testing the bear she back off and ran. She looked 

around for small prey like rabbits or voles hidden in the snow. She

when back to the same herd she had hunted from earlier and

found them, She stalked and leaped from the shadow giving 

the elk such a supprise one kicked her in the leg and bolted. Julie 

checked her leg and found a broken bone. She limped 

and cared for her leg, exercising when nearly healed and treating with healing

herbs. Once it was healed she started traveling around 

Yellow Stone park. She avoided certain packs and found 

different dens to rest in. 

Finally, the winter is finally over thought Julie as she 
padded out to find melted snow, warm weather and
the river no longer frozen. Julie walked around and saw a 
dangerous pack. She spied on them from the forest and left.
Julie found lots of prey and made many successful hunts.

Julie the wolf 1 part 1

Julie the wolf

1 part 1

Julie looked around. She was a dark grey wolf that was

very strong and quick.  She had been amazed by bears, she knew not

to be seen by bears when eating and never to challenge them 

yet had a large mind to them. They were beautiful, powerful 

animals whom could take down large prey with one single bite.

It was a harsh winter and Julie hadn't eat in a few days.

Two more moons to go Julie thought, before the 

winter ends. She was very hungry. She came across 

a dead elk. She sniffed it and found that it was

a day old. She took a bite out of it and spit

it out. The blood was enough. Too much sudden food

could be fatal and just seeing rotten meat was enough

to make her have a belly ache of days. Walking across a

forest Julie sniffed for deer. Elk is Delicious but

I'm too weak. A fawn should be enough, Julie thought. 

It took a while but she finally found a herd.

A couple fawn stood next to its mother. Julie gave so much mercy to 

the starving herd suffering only to be ended by a wolf

she nearly left. She forgot to stalk and scared to herd away

limping across. One fawn tripped and Julie caught it. 

It was food but she had caught the runt so it was small

and stringy.Julie ate a little bit and then buried 

it to the snow so it wouldn't decay and rested

there.

Julie woke up and ate some more of the elk, everyday eating a little

more. One day while eating it the wind rose and a bear

caught the scent and came roaring and showing its 

strength. Julie didn't want to fight for

even though she had eaten was still weak.

 For a second she studied the muscles and the claws of the 

bear suddenly realizing it should be hibernating.

Then the bear roared again and she lost her deep thoughts and 

returned to earth. She had to eat and she couldn't battle the

bear so she tossed the bear a large chunk of meat. The flesh

stood at the bears feet and the bear eyes said to

her, This is all you give me, me the

great and powerful grizzly?