2014年11月16日 星期日

The Warriors

The Warriors
By Kimberley Ng
1 part 1

I walked out of my den, yawning from sleep. "Hey Redpaw's finally awake!" Said Goldenpaw the leopard.I and Goldenpaw were only apprentices and so was Riverpaw and Grasspaw. We are training to become warriors. We will get our warrior names soon after all our training is done. My mentor was a Jagaur named Spotfur and the leader was a lion named Sunstar. "Come on Ravenpaw, your going on a hhunting patrol." I went along with the patrol, walking along the thick trees and greens of the  forest we live in. "Spread out."Ordered the leader of the patrol. I went into a place where a birch tree had sprung and a herd of deer were there. I sliently climbed up a tree without them knowing and then, rested on a branch, leaped down on a deer. I struggled to keep on her back but luckliy my claws dug in a bit deeper so I could anchor my self. I finally brought her down and whispered a thanks to heaven. I then draged the deer back to the hunting patrol and layed it in the pile. "Good job!" Spotfur prasied me, as we walked back to camp, all of us holding a rather large piece of prey when another hunting patrol came back too. When we put the fresh-kill into our pile at camp everyone plucked out their favorite meal and ate there, very large fill. I was taking out an fish and bit into it, savoring the sweetness, of the salmons last meal.

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Hey guys!!! Yes Im back, sorry about the half year delay but Ive been real busy with school. SO SORRY!!!T_T But there is good news! A new series!!!Why you ask? Well I want to it and I have time so the new series is based off the book Warriors and There might be MANY new series so YAY!!!






Heres a review and lastly
ANIMAL ON!
(Yeah I didnt forget)